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Can blind cats be heros? by Kariotic Can blind cats be heros? by Kariotic
Perhaps...

Scene from Warriors - The sight

.:SPOILER:.
Just loved how happy Jayfetaher was, even it was just for a short time c:
Its after he saved Lionpaw and Windpaw <3

I JUST HATE THE EYES
Cant draw blind cats :c

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Okay, so, I guess I'll start with the bad - well, not BAD since this whole thing is FANTASTIC, but the places where there's room for improvement? Sure. Really the only thing I can think of is the face - I don't know what kind of style you're going for anatomy-wise, but in general I think the eyes, nose, and mouth are a bit too small in comparison with the size of Jay's head.

YAY, now for the good! :))

First of all, can I just say that you appear to be a very advanced artist? I mean, I love the colors you used on jay, and how subtle the stripes are. You also made his fur look really realistic, but in a cartoony way, too - something that is not easy to do. I also really like the background. It may be simple, but it goes well with your style and it doesn't look rushed. I hope this was helpful :)

*ps: I'm sure someone has already pointed this out to you, but in case other people bug you about it, you might want to change "windpaw" to "breezepaw" :)
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kirbygirl20 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ZOMG OF COURSE YOU CAN JAYFEATHER
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:iconredeyecat12:
RedEyeCat12 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014
In favourites! :D
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:iconmoonawolf79:
moonawolf79 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yesyes
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:iconfeathersoul:
Feathersoul Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes they do 8D
Just love Jay and this picture ♥
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:iconkariotic:
Kariotic Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thank you c:
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:iconfeathersoul:
Feathersoul Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
;D
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:iconseeelenschatten:
Seeelenschatten Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow *-*
man sieht das er blind ist, das hast du gut getroffen ^^
ch mag auch diesen Efekt im BG und din shadding ist auch super...wie immer eig. XD
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Kariotic Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Danke 8D
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:iconseeelenschatten:
Seeelenschatten Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:D
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:iconbc-paws:
BC-paws Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
so cute!!!
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:iconkariotic:
Kariotic Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you *o*
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:iconbc-paws:
BC-paws Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yw :hug:
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:iconlordstarscreamy:
LordStarsCreamy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ich mag ihn mit seiner grummeligen art ich hoffe die behält er bei, weil es einfach so lustig ist :D
an sich hast du das bild schön gezeichnet, die flauschigkeit an seinem fell ist toll, ich liebe diese leuchtend blauen augen und die muster wow *-* ^-^
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:iconkariotic:
Kariotic Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Er is auch mal liebling, grade weil er so mürrisch is o3o
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:iconlordstarscreamy:
LordStarsCreamy Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ja der meinung bin ich auch :D
er ist wie gelbzahn nur jung und männlich xD
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JADESLICEWOOD Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
actually, blind cat eyes are extremely simple c: all it is, is a VERY dark blue, that almost looks like black, and the pupil is extremely dilated. as seen here in this image of one :[link] but other then that you did a great job c: I liked this scene, to ^^
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xXxCallMeGamerxXx Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist
Aww. It's shao cute. :3 <3
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Doctor-Kiba Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You mean Breezepaw*
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MADZchickenFreak Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
LOL I have a chicken named Breeze, but sister keeps calling it Wind. XD 

Wait, why sis I say that...? random connection.
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ShadamyForGood1 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yes they can be heroes. very nice job.
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:iconhoki-lokison:
Hoki-Lokison Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I love it. Jayfeather is my favorite character and this is awesome
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:iconjannasuperwomaaaaan:
JannaSuperwomaaaaan Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow ! Die ist so knuffisch. *-*
Das einzige, was ich bemängele sind die Augen D:
Ansonsten ist ALL FANTASTIC !! (:
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clancat1124 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
no i think the eyes look perfect
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:iconpiyo-chick:
Piyo-chick Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
i like the eyes
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:iconlightningheart1:
Lightningheart1 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome!
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serenitywhitewolf Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
Super!
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KiddosNightmare Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
sooo süß!! er sieht so fröhlich aus!
Aber wer is windpaw?
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:iconkariotic:
Kariotic Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
windpfote
Im englischen heißt er Breezepaw, habs net richtig übersetzt XD
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KiddosNightmare Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
aso *kopf meets tisch* macht ja nix, hätt ja mal ein wenig mitdenken können xD Saß nur da und dachte ...windpaw.. wer zur hölle war windpaw xDDD
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melfurny Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good, good job! :D Well done!




Would you like to join :iconthe-eight-kingdoms:?
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Spenzix3 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
episch *-*
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BlackLightning95 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow du kannst echt super toll malen 8DDD
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BloodLustingCreature Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great job! But you got the name wrong. It was Breezepaw not Windpaw XD
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Kariotic Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dont know XD In the germen books it says "Windpfote" and Windpaw is the translation XD I never red the english books XD
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BloodLustingCreature Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ohh okay XD He's called Breezepaw in the books cause they're not supposed to have the same names as the clans in their names XD
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AquanaPlaysElsword Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
q_q Sieht toll aus und erinnert mich an meine kürlich verstorbene blinde Katze!
Echt, wunder,wunderschön ♥
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Tuepfelsprung Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
so süß *-* und awesome^^
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PsychoticDreamTheory Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hrr, gefällt. (: Die Texturierung und alles, die Mimik der Katze und wie du sie in Szene gesetzt hast. <3
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FreezingLeav Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Voll süßes Bild UND ein Kommi von mir ist bei dem Speedpaint drin xD. Ich mag deine Speedpaints übrigens.
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Amy-Senpaii Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow das sieht richtig gut aus :D
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